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     "- Once again, representing this data visually will require determining the coordinates associated with each observation.\n",
     "- The gaybourhoods data set defines a \"gaybourhood index\" which effectively measures how friendly a given neighbourhood is to queer people. Since this index is entirely subjective, we will need to closely evaluate it's usefulness for our project and investigate different ways to quantify \"queer-friendliness\"\n",
     "- In addition to the last point, since, of course, no matter what choice of observations we make, the measurement will still be subjective, answering this research question will come more so in the form of comparing and contrasting different measurements to see what they tell us.\n",
-    "- Obviously, visualizing this among many aspects of the other research questions would involve projecting the data onto a map of the United States, so this research question would establish the motivation for subsequent inquiries."
+    "- Obviously, visualizing this among many aspects of the other research questions would involve projecting the data onto a map of the United States, so visualizing this research question would motivate many of the visualizations for other components of this project"
    ]
   },
   {